changeset 327:0c01d3ae7ca1

- Fixed some grammar - Fixed left/right quotes
author Andrey Alexeev <andrew@nginx.com>
date Wed, 18 Jan 2012 15:49:53 +0000
parents 92213e993a0b
children 05bddd18056f
files xml/en/docs/welcome_nginx_facebook.xml
diffstat 1 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) [+]
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--- a/xml/en/docs/welcome_nginx_facebook.xml	Tue Jan 17 11:55:35 2012 +0000
+++ b/xml/en/docs/welcome_nginx_facebook.xml	Wed Jan 18 15:49:53 2012 +0000
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!DOCTYPE article SYSTEM "../../../dtd/article.dtd">
 
 <article name="I am trying to open Facebook and
-                instead I am getting “Welcome to nginx!” page"
+                instead I am getting &ldquo;Welcome to nginx!&rdquo; page"
          link="/en/docs/welcome_nginx_facebook.html"
          lang="en">
 
@@ -11,15 +11,15 @@
 <para>
 <initial>Q:</initial>
 I am trying to open Facebook, Yahoo!, Google, or some
-other well known web site and instead I am getting a blank web page
-with a message referring to nginx: “Welcome to nginx!” or
-“404 Not Found / nginx”.
+other well-known web site and instead I am getting a blank web page
+with a message referring to nginx: &ldquo;Welcome to nginx!&rdquo; or
+&ldquo;404 Not Found / nginx&rdquo;.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 I suspect something is wrong and there is probably a malicious attempt here
 to direct me to a rogue web page (for hacking my computer, phishing etc.).
-Why is that and what nginx has to do with my attempts to connect
+Why is that and what has nginx to do with my attempts to connect
 to Facebook (Yahoo!, Google, etc.) ?
 </para>
 
@@ -30,23 +30,28 @@
 <para>
 <initial>A:</initial>
 nginx is among the 3 most popular web servers in the world.
-It is a free open source software which is absolutely legitimate and
+It is a free open source server software which is absolutely legitimate and
 has nothing to do with any kind of threatening or malicious activity per se.
-A web page saying “Welcome to nginx!” is one of the diagnostics responses
-that can be produced by a server running nginx.
+A web page saying &ldquo;Welcome to nginx!&rdquo; is one of the diagnostics
+responses that can be produced by an Internet server running nginx.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 However, you are right in your assumption that something must be wrong
-with your computer or operating system setup when you are trying to access
-a well known web site and instead of a familiar page you get
-“Welcome to nginx!”. This should not happen if your computer is clean and safe.
-We recommend you to check and verify your operating system setup
-(possibly with the help of your ISP or support staff),
-but also it would be a good idea to install and run an anti-virus software
+with your computer or browser, or operating system setup when you are
+trying to access a well known web site and instead of a familiar page you get
+&ldquo;Welcome to nginx!&rdquo;. This should not happen if your computer
+is clean and safe.
+</para>
+
+<para>
+We recommend you to check and verify your entire system setup
+(possibly with the help of your ISP or another support personnel),
+and it would also be a good idea to install and run an anti-virus software
 on your computer. It may happen that some malign entity is trying
-to intercept the traffic from your computer and potentially cause
-significant harm to you and the other users on the Internet.
+to divert the traffic from your computer to a different server and
+potentially cause significant harm to you and the other users on
+the Internet.
 </para>
 
 </section>