diff xml/en/docs/http/ngx_http_geo_module.xml @ 966:95c3c3bbf1ce

Text review.
author Egor Nikitin <yegor.nikitin@gmail.com>
date Wed, 14 Aug 2013 12:03:41 +0400
parents 9dab69f2b71d
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--- a/xml/en/docs/http/ngx_http_geo_module.xml	Wed Aug 14 17:21:19 2013 +0400
+++ b/xml/en/docs/http/ngx_http_geo_module.xml	Wed Aug 14 12:03:41 2013 +0400
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 
 <para>
 The <literal>ngx_http_geo_module</literal> module creates variables
-whose values depend on the client IP address.
+with values depending on the client IP address.
 </para>
 
 </section>
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 <para>
 Describes the dependency of values of the specified variable
 on the client IP address.
-By default an address is taken from the <var>$remote_addr</var> variable
+By default, the address is taken from the <var>$remote_addr</var> variable,
 but it can also be taken from another variable (0.7.27), for example:
 <example>
 geo $arg_remote_addr $geo {
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
 <note>
 Since variables are evaluated only when used, the mere existence
 of even a large number of declared “<literal>geo</literal>” variables
-does not incur any extra costs for request processing.
+does not cause any extra costs for request processing.
 </note>
 </para>
 
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
 
 <tag-name><literal>default</literal></tag-name>
 <tag-desc>
-a value of variable if the client address does not
+a value set to the variable if the client address does not
 match any of the specified addresses.
 When addresses are specified in CIDR notation,
 “<literal>0.0.0.0/0</literal>” and “<literal>::/0</literal>”
@@ -124,10 +124,10 @@
 <tag-name><literal>proxy_recursive</literal></tag-name>
 <tag-desc>
 enables recursive address search (1.3.0, 1.2.1).
-If recursive search is disabled then instead of an original client
+If recursive search is disabled then instead of the original client
 address that matches one of the trusted addresses, the last
 address sent in <header>X-Forwarded-For</header> will be used.
-If recursive search is enabled then instead an original client
+If recursive search is enabled then instead of the original client
 address that matches one of the trusted addresses, the last
 non-trusted address sent in <header>X-Forwarded-For</header> will be used.
 </tag-desc>
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@
 <tag-desc>
 indicates that addresses are specified as ranges (0.7.23).
 This parameter should be the first.
-To speed up loading of a geo base, addresses should be put in increasing order.
+To speed up loading of a geo base, addresses should be put in ascending order.
 </tag-desc>
 
 </list>