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diff xml/en/support.xml @ 659:77a3314c74a7
Avoid the uses of second person.
author | Ruslan Ermilov <ru@nginx.com> |
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date | Tue, 28 Aug 2012 09:23:40 +0000 |
parents | af3f38e349eb |
children | 639bbb0c9d05 |
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--- a/xml/en/support.xml Tue Aug 28 09:15:17 2012 +0000 +++ b/xml/en/support.xml Tue Aug 28 09:23:40 2012 +0000 @@ -29,14 +29,12 @@ <section name="Mailing Lists"> <para> -You can +Mailing lists can be <link url="http://nginx.org/mailman/listinfo"> -browse</link> -the mailing lists. -To post to a mailing list, you must first -<link url="http://nginx.org/mailman/listinfo"> -subscribe</link> -an e-mail address that you will use for posting. +browsed</link>. +To post to a mailing list, +an e-mail address that will be used for posting must first be +<link url="http://nginx.org/mailman/listinfo">subscribed</link>. </para> <para> @@ -123,8 +121,7 @@ <section name="Commercial Support"> <para> -If you’re looking for a commercial support option -please refer to the +For a commercial support option please refer to the <link url="http://nginx.com/support.html"> support page on our nginx.com web site</link>. </para>